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A Real Dream

An orphan growing up not with dreams and goals but loneliness....
He was being teased by all the people beside him and never got support from them...
He was named LONER by all the people and well-known with that name only.... wherever he go ...
To come out with this loneliness he tried all the things what a man can do with all his efforts but couldn't make way for pleasure mind!
Finally he was addicted to video games by playing like a superhero atleast in his dreaming world...
And he finally struck with a game where he was the only king in his kingdom!
While coming to game....he is the king, he goes frequently to other kingdoms and get their loot by fighting with the king in direct!
He used to talk to the founder of that game that the game was fantastic and saying some bugs to them...
Finally he got a call from the founder giving him an offer to detect bugs and fix them directly on his own!
The game is virtual reality game....one should go into the game to play it....this is the thing which attracted LONER to play the game continuosly..
One day LONER invited his only closest friend to play that game along with him...
While playing the game LONER got blue sword and the friend got red sword...
It's a pretty scenic dramatic fight with complete thunders while fighting with swords...
Forgetting the real world living in gaming world...he suddenly downed his sword in the friends chest...
Now it's the time where he got shocked...
He saw the real blood instead of the thunders and lightings...
His eyes filled with ocean of tears.
Hastily, he informed this to the founder and got reply that they are working on the bug and they got strucked in the game and must stay there for next 2 years

And then he suddenly opened his drowsy eyes and realised that the king was grown in his illusion and made a note that he should never encourage this kind of stuff in his span again!

P.S : last paragraph was added as an extension which clears many of doubts 




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Comments

  1. Padmavathi peketi1 January 2018 at 08:52

    Part 1 realistic ga try chesav ga??
    Part 2 real chesey👌👌👌👌👏👏

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  2. Anonymous2 January 2018 at 03:47

    Narration is good and story is unique. I think u need to review the sentence "struck with a game where he was the only king in his kingdom!" formation, it doesn't conveying your mean that he is the only one in his kingdom.
    If I am wrong please forget my comment. Any way good narration but it seems to be incomplete story and need sequel.

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    1. Manikanta Kapaganti2 January 2018 at 10:47

      Sure bro! I'll correct my mistakes from next one.... thanks alot for the review...and good to hear suggestions ❤

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